Who am I? Well, I am a first time novelist living near San Francisco. Fiction writing is not my profession, but I had to do something with my degree in English Literature from the University of Michigan.
I am happily partnered to the hottest man ever..
That is MACK of MACKsf.com fame. The quintessential MAN's man, he served as part of my inspiration for Sgt Tate.
My e-mail can be found on my profile: HERE I would love to hear your comments.
I really hope you continue to write another tale like Sgt. Tate. And hope you find a publisher. I would love to reread again with all the edits.
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PS, I want to apologize for not sending you my comments as you submitted them but I usually try to wait till the tale is completed.
With a partner like MACK it is not hard to see the inspiration you get in Sgt.Tate. I was dying to read each new piece your writing is as beautiful as you and your partner are. Phil
ReplyDeleteI love the SGT Tate Story. I espically liked the ending. I was hooked from the 1st installment and couldn't wait to read more. I would like to see some more stories of Sgt. Tate and Lennox.
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Wow Man, was captivated from start to finish. I could totally relate to Dan. So glad the story turned out with a happy ending, and hope there will be more additions to that story line as time goes on. The initial 12 days over but now there seems to be quite a few years to come....
ReplyDeleteOne of the most erotic novels i have ever read,it took my breath away,Just as you man MACK i consider the most masculine of MEN
ReplyDeleteThis is one of, if not THE greatest erotic story I've ever read! It had me so hooked, it's truly unlike any other erotic story I've read, taking all the usual tropes and playing with our knowledge of them! Sgt Tate might be my favorite character in this entire genre, not just because he's hot, but because of his general growth and imperfections despite his porn archetype. I came to this story for the sex, raunch, and bdsm. I stayed for the deep plot, the twists, and...as weird as it is to say it...The cringe I kept feeling throughout it! There were several times I was legitimately afraid for Dan's safety (I know he's fictional, but he's such an easy character to relate to), I was terrified when Dan was "almost arrested" and when he was left with Boris, not to mention the feelings of fear and drama I felt when Sgt Tate's demeanor went into Drill Instructor mode. Then the entire second half really made me love these two together. By introducing a hot story, then using it to create such an emotional one, you really created something amazing!
ReplyDeleteJake, did you read it on Nifty or did you download it from Amazon, iTunes, etc?
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